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Officer Brogan has zero tolerance for punks like Alfonso. He could spot Alfonso’s smug act a mile away, but that didn’t stop Brogan from conducting his own thorough search. The way Alfonso flinched only made Brogan more deliberate. He made sure his hands left no doubt in Alfonso’s mind about who was in charge.
Thinking fast, Alfonso knew his usual smirk wouldn’t work on this officer. He offered Brogan a deal, his voice losing its earlier bravado. Brogan considered the proposal, his mind lingering on the memory of Alfonso’s sharp intake of breath during the search. A slow smile spread across Brogan’s face. He decided he liked Alfonso’s new, more respectful tone. A deal was suddenly very appealing to Officer Brogan.
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